Score: 7

"I liked it"

submission: Paffendorf Dance - MBI

date: October 6, 2008

But it's not as good as your other stuff. Honestly though, looking at your work, I think you're too hard a critic on yourself, though I guess that's the sign of a true artist, eh? I have the same problem, and it's why I never submit anything. You still kick ass though, I like your style and choice of inspiration.

Score: 8

"Interesting stuff"

submission: MOAPAC - Episode 1

date: September 14, 2008

I like how the story was laid out, but it definitely seemed to progress slower due to a lapse in dialog by the characters. I thought the humor was definitely a 10 of 10, i got a big kick out of the whole thing. Aside from the cartoon antics, my friends and I get on in the same way. I think the last scene was great, too, though it's not what I expected. I thought it was going to involve the key somehow going down the wrong pipe.

Score: 10

"Nice job!"

submission: FrameByFrame

date: September 10, 2008

This piece had a very fluid quality, and I thoroughly enjoyed the music. Everything was very smooth and supple, but had some sort of command as if to say, "Watch me. I am beautiful."